I really like your writing. I never knew that black holes could be so exciting! You have put a lot of facts about black holes and I have learnt a lot. But on slide 4 the picture is going over the writing and I couldn’t read it, so next time maybe make it a bit smaller. I wasn’t quite sure what these words mean: vary, primordial and stellar. I loved your writing. All of the facts make me want to study it, as well as not wanting to go to space any more!
I really like your writing. I never knew that black holes could be so exciting! You have put a lot of facts about black holes and I have learnt a lot. But on slide 4 the picture is going over the writing and I couldn’t read it, so next time maybe make it a bit smaller. I wasn’t quite sure what these words mean: vary, primordial and stellar. I loved your writing. All of the facts make me want to study it, as well as not wanting to go to space any more!
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